http://www.locksmith-answers.com/am-i-a-good-poet/ All About Locksmith here. Find answers to your questions. Sun, 06 Jun 2010 12:45:10 +0000 hourly 1 http://www.locksmith-answers.com/am-i-a-good-poet/#comment-2686 J. W. H Wed, 01 Jul 2009 02:32:22 +0000 http://www.locksmith-answers.com/am-i-a-good-poet/#comment-2686 Good poetry tells a story.. Just rhyming is not good poetry.. I believe the test for all good poems is, do they make sense.. I think yours is intelligent but maybe a little over blown.. looks to me like you could create two more poems from the same material with a story line written in meter with good paceing. Write it again and simplify and see if you don't like it better. A good writer knows when what they have written is good.. they don't have to ask others.. You can write.. good luck and keep it up. Good poetry tells a story.. Just rhyming is not good poetry.. I believe the test for all good poems is, do they make sense.. I think yours is intelligent but maybe a little over blown.. looks to me like you could create two more poems from the same material with a story line written in meter with good paceing. Write it again and simplify and see if you don’t like it better. A good writer knows when what they have written is good.. they don’t have to ask others.. You can write.. good luck and keep it up.

]]> http://www.locksmith-answers.com/am-i-a-good-poet/#comment-2685 sophist Mon, 29 Jun 2009 22:28:34 +0000 http://www.locksmith-answers.com/am-i-a-good-poet/#comment-2685 Can't tell with one poem. Can’t tell with one poem.

]]> http://www.locksmith-answers.com/am-i-a-good-poet/#comment-2684 wildenarcissist Sun, 28 Jun 2009 12:20:36 +0000 http://www.locksmith-answers.com/am-i-a-good-poet/#comment-2684 not bad but needs work not bad but needs work

]]> http://www.locksmith-answers.com/am-i-a-good-poet/#comment-2683 carla Sat, 27 Jun 2009 13:41:48 +0000 http://www.locksmith-answers.com/am-i-a-good-poet/#comment-2683 yes you are it is very good yes you are it is very good

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